Words
were always easy
Truth
was always hidden
Simple
as they sound
Words pour out
just to
stop
at the edge of my
mouth
“Why?”
My Heart demands
“Not Now”
My Brain throws back
“But it is the truth”
The struggle
was a year
old
always losing
society, family, religion
were reasons
against it
love
was the only strength
for it
Twenty Ten
was all then
Now in ’11
is when
I tell myself
I CAN!
Tell
the world
what is
simple and true
in
my words
honest and humble
for
my angel
beautiful and true
I, as flawed as possible
love, as more than ever
You, for now and forever
Sushma, the first ray
of
my new dawn!
143
in our code 🙂
This was part of Jingle’s Thursday poetry rally.
This poem won me the perfect poet award at Jingle’s week 37 Rally. I nominate Kavita for the next week.
A poem for you
is worth all the awards from the world
A word from you
is worth all the words from the world
A smile from you
is worth all the happiness from a flower
love from you
is worth all the good things of this life
Two Words
to
Jingle
From US
Thank You!
Thanks Keshav for all the love 🙂 … iam so blessed to have you …. each day I love you more, today more than yesterday and less than tomorrow… love you so much and love you hamesha….
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sweet piece,
easy and beautiful flow…
code is 143, did you create this code? can you explain the code?
happy 2011.
Thanks for the support…;)
your poetry is like the morning sun, lovely and hopeful.
143 – I(1) Love(4) You(3) (number of letters).
Thanks Jingle for your support. I finished my 18 visits.
If am not wrong, 143 = I Love you (the num of letters in each word)
You are right!
Happy to see this poem Keshav. Finally you told the world what you have always been wanted to…
Yes man… 🙂
Claps ! no no .. seetiyaan !!!!! wonderful poem 🙂 God bless you love !
🙂 Thanks a lot nimue. Nobody ever gave seetiyaan to my poems. Have a great year.
this one deserved !!! 😉
Hey like the wiki linking 😀
Thanks for noticing it.
This poem was beautiful, cute, and inspiring!
It was a light poem that was also filled with meaning. I really liked it!
~~Aynsley
Thank You Aynsley. I like ’em this way too.
Nice poem from heart .
Hope everything will be beautiful for you in the way ahead.
A very HAppy New Year.
I have a beautiful woman at home and lovely comments from people like you. I’ll be alright 🙂
Warm and positive. Enjoyed soooo much! 😉
Honest and informal. Loved your appreciation.
that was an optimistic start. wish i could say the same for me.
but this made me hope for something better.
a good read right here =]
-kyogakura
Thank you Kyoichi. It was a great start, but it took some courage to announce it. Because we work together in the same office. Add a little extra (risk) to your efforts, helps a lot.
Simple, but heartfelt as most of your poems seem to go, Keshav! I’m happy for you both to have found each other… Happy New Year — here’s to wonderful new beginnings! 🙂
Thanks Hema. You are indeed a lovely person for saying that, I aim to do exactly that – get my heart in the middle of my poems 🙂
Simply beautiful 😀 xx
thanks for posting one piece to honor the rally.
Happy Wednesday.
Thanks Jingle.
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Very pretty Poem Thank you
Thank you for your kind comment.
Beautiful. Simply daring. How do you make it all rhythm so well? You got a talent there you do. Maybe you can add a little poem in your guest post? Just a thought.
Thats a good idea, maybe I will. I’m happy you enjoyed this one.
Thanks for sharing…
amazing poem.
A++
My Pleasure Jingle
Absolutely wonderful poem. Loved the flow!
Thanks Tasha. It was very dear to me when I wrote it. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
great declaration of love keshav! here’s mine for this new year potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/03/15/life/
Thanks for your support!
That was mad cool!!!!! SWEEEEEEEEEEEET!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/01/10/vanished-antidote/
yeah..a little..but very cool for her 🙂
beautiful entry for potluck. 🙂 *hugs*
Kellie Elmore
Thanks Kellie. I loved to write this too.
Aww…. how sweet! May this new year bring the best for the both of you…
Cool use of that “code”… (giggles)
aha…U like? Thanks Kavita. We will make sure your blessing will come true for us in this year. Thanks for the support
and with this comes the perfect poet award week 37… congrats! 🙂
Thanks…
You write beautiful poetry 🙂
May those words flow freely this year!
This is a very intriguing poem Keshav
Beautiful poem. She is a very lucky lady.
Thank You Lisa. We are lucky to have each other.
“I love you” is my favorite part.
Very Nice.
I have been doing a bit of poem writing these days. I’m not real sure what category they fit under. I haven’t really studied poem writing, I just write what I feel.
“I just write what I feel”…thats the best way. Thanks for enjoying this poem.
brilliaanntttt !!! KRN m visitng u after a long time.. and i wonder now why did i stop :O
beautiful poem 🙂
Thanks meg. I’ve become busy too. Drop in any time you are free.
Greetings, how are you? Your absence is missed, I wish you well!
Hope to see you in Poets Rally Week 38, find Thursday Poets Rally in the header area.
Love your poetry talent and looking forward to a profound experience with your input.
Cheers.
xoxox
Hey..Thanks Jingle for the invite. I’m busy preparing for my wedding. So I won’t be at the rally.
Very nice writing! 🙂
Thank You brownpaperbaggirl
Hi – this is Chloe from “Writing Days-Happy Days” with my new blog. Just to let you know I’ve subscribed to your blog now as Blossom Dreams. Please visit if you get a chance (if you haven’t already).
Many thanks,
Chloe xx
Hey Chloe. Thanks for the update. I checked out your blog today – Looks beautiful!
Keep Writing!
How are you?
come to poets rally if you wish, I have more than 1000 poets going through the rally during the year of 2010-2011, hard to put you on top list unless you stay active and join the rally often,
do love your talent a lot, and wish to have you around.
bless your day.
keep inspiring.
Hope to see you in.
xoxox
Hey Jingle. I’ve not been active at all for the last few months. Schedule has been crazy after I got married. I’m also trying to find another place for my poetry.
Thank you so much for taking the time to encourage us!